2nd Take.

During my second take of editing I decided to shorten the long opening scene as it was far too long. I then decided to cut the scene going through the window as planned in the first take. In my second take I also made the film a bit longer and created it up to after the girl has been outside and has rushed back into the house as she couldn't see anything. This is all I have got up to so far and it seems to be flowing a lot better than the first take.