4th Take.

In my fourth take I decided to start adding some sound to my film and created a voice over for the other line of the phone call. This firstly didn't sound right as it sounded to loud as if it wasn't coming from the phone but I messed about with it and now it sounds a lot better. I also put in the bangs in that she hears at the start of the film. I changed the ending a little bit by taking out a sequence but it doesn't still seem right to me.